Tailspinner's Ink

Talespinner's Ink is a creative space for fantasy lovers and poetry enthusiasts. Check out my series called 'Mage Slayer,' a reimagining of the Jack the Giant Slayer legend with a touch of King Arthur, along with captivating short stories from an epic fantasy series and DnD-inspired tales. Explore poetry rooted in the wisdom of Psalms and Proverbs, including the popular piece, 'You Are Not Alone,' inspired by 1 Kings 19. Join the journey of storytelling and reflection.

Monday, July 14, 2025

The Origin of Divine Power: Arondor's Creation Myth

How the Sword of Arondor and Tree of Zoi Came to Be

Overview

The foundation of all power in Arondor traces back to a single moment of divine sacrifice that split reality itself. This creation myth explains the origin of the Tor-Rus magic system, the nature of divine artifacts, and the cosmic conflict that shapes every story in The Legacy Saga.

"From divine sacrifice came the two sources of all power—one born of blood, one born of tears."

The First Act of Divine Love

Before Creation

In the primordial realm of Mel'salem (Heaven), surrounded by the Mel'akah (holy griffins), the divine trinity ElohYahRuosh (Father, Son, and Spirit) made a decision that would echo through all eternity:

"Let us create beings who can choose to love us freely."

The Divine Vulnerability

This decision represented unprecedented divine risk:

Free Will Requirement: True love cannot be forced—it must be chosen
Rejection Possibility: Mortals might choose to turn away from their Creator
Cosmic Consequence: The Creator accepted eternal grief as the price of genuine relationship

The Sword of Arondor: Born from Divine Blood

The Forging of Justice

Understanding that free will required guidance, ElohYahRuosh performed the first divine sacrifice:

The Sacred Process

Divine Opening: ElohYahRuosh opened His own veins
Life Given, Not Lost: This was not death but the willing gift of essence
Physical Manifestation: The divine blood crystallized into the Sword of Arondor

What the Sword Represents

Core Attributes

Divine Law: The ultimate standard of right and wrong
Cosmic Structure: The framework that holds reality together
True Identity: The absolute truth of who each being is meant to be
Perfect Justice: The divine balance that maintains order

Symbolic Significance

Truth Source: Origin of all Torikah (structured) powers
Moral Compass: Physical manifestation of divine will
Protection Tool: Designed to guard what is most precious
Leadership Symbol: Authority to maintain divine order

The Sword's First Commission

ElohYahRuosh entrusted the Sword to Malik, the first man, with a sacred charge:

"Guard what I am about to create with My tears. Let justice protect love."

The Tree of Zoi: Born from Divine Tears

The Planting of Love

As ElohYahRuosh contemplated the suffering that free will would inevitably bring to His beloved creation—the pain, rejection, and spiritual death—a single tear fell from His divine eye.

The Nature of the Tear

Not Regret: This was not sorrow over a mistake
Pure Love: Infinite, unconditional affection for creation
Eternal Hope: Faith in ultimate redemption and restoration
Willing Sacrifice: Accepting personal pain for others' benefit

What the Tree Represents

Core Attributes

Divine Love: Unconditional, sacrificial, transformative relationship
Spiritual Growth: The potential for change, development, and redemption
Creator Connection: The living bond between ElohYahRuosh and humanity
Divine Grace: Unearned blessing and spiritual empowerment

Functional Purpose

Direct Communion: Mortals could speak directly with their Creator
Spiritual Nourishment: Source of ongoing divine sustenance
Grace Access: Portal for unearned divine favor
Growth Catalyst: Accelerated spiritual and moral development

The Tree's Living Connection

The Tree of Zoi was not merely a plant—it was:

Divine Presence: ElohYahRuosh's active presence in the physical realm
Grace Source: Origin of all Rusikah (flowing) powers
Life Foundation: The spiritual sustenance that enabled flourishing
Love Manifestation: Physical proof of divine affection

The First Guardians: Perfect Balance

Sacred Roles Assigned

Malik: Guardian of Justice

Sacred Trust: Protector of the Sword of Arondor
Responsibility: Maintaining divine order and justice
Authority: Moral leadership over early humanity
Symbolic Role: Represents structured, disciplined approach to divine relationship

Reyuma: Keeper of Love

Sacred Trust: Steward of the Tree of Zoi
Responsibility: Facilitating divine connection and grace
Authority: Spiritual guidance and nurturing
Symbolic Role: Represents flowing, graceful approach to divine relationship

The Perfect System

Together, Malik and Reyuma embodied:

Justice and Mercy: Perfect balance of divine attributes
Structure and Flow: Complementary approaches to power
Truth and Love: Unified expression of divine nature
Order and Grace: Harmonious divine governance

The First Generation

The Twelve Knights and Maidens

Sons: Twelve knights, each embodying aspects of divine justice
Daughters: Twelve maidens, each reflecting divine grace
Tor-Rus Origin: The magic system flowed naturally from this divine balance
Generational Legacy: Powers passed through bloodlines connected to either Sword or Tree

The Golden Age Characteristics

During this perfect period:

Clear Guidance: The Sword provided unmistakable moral direction
Unlimited Connection: The Tree offered constant divine communion
Harmonious Power: Justice and mercy worked in perfect unity
Protective Purpose: Power served protection and nurturing, never conquest
Divine Fellowship: Humanity lived in direct relationship with their Creator

The Great Betrayal: When Jealousy Destroys Paradise

Sero's Corruption

Among the Mel'akah (divine griffins) was Sero the Rus, whose perfect understanding led to perfect jealousy:

Sero's Grievances

Perceived Injustice: Why should weak mortals receive such intimate divine attention?
Superior Claim: As a divine being, Sero believed he deserved greater access to divine power
Efficiency Argument: Divine gifts would be better used by a more powerful being
Liberation Justification: Humanity needed "freedom" from divine "tyranny"

The Fatal Flaw

Sero's rebellion stemmed from a fundamental misunderstanding:

Love vs. Power: He valued power over relationship
Deserving vs. Grace: He focused on merit rather than gift
Control vs. Freedom: He sought domination rather than willing love

The Deception Strategy

Sero's plan revealed sophisticated evil:

Identity Theft

Perfect Disguise: Appeared as Kal, Malik and Reyuma's eldest son
Trust Exploitation: Used familial love as a weapon
Surprise Attack: Malik never suspected his "beloved son"

Systematic Destruction

Murder Malik: Eliminate the guardian of justice
Steal the Sword: Claim divine authority for himself
Destroy the Tree: Sever humanity's divine connection
Rule as "Liberator": Present tyranny as freedom

The Moment of Catastrophe

When the false Kal struck down Malik and seized the Sword of Arondor, the cosmic order shattered. The ultimate blasphemy followed: using the Sword of Divine Justice to destroy the Tree of Divine Love.

The Catastrophic Consequences

Immediate Cosmic Effects

The moment the Tree of Zoi fell, reality itself convulsed:

Spiritual Devastation

Severed Connection: Humanity lost direct communion with ElohYahRuosh
Fragmented Power: Tor-Rus abilities became difficult and dangerous to access
Vulnerability to Corruption: The world became permeable to dark influences
Grace Interruption: Unearned divine favor became rare and precious

Physical Catastrophe

Geological Chaos: The massive Tree's fall reshaped continents
Mountain Formation:
- Trunk became the Noordania mountain range
- Crown formed Old Ithoria highlands
- Stump became the Mount of Zoi where the Yahra'Haba temple now stands
Climate Disruption: Weather patterns destabilized across Arondor

Reyuma's Tragic Choice

Witnessing Kal (not knowing it was Sero in disguise) standing over Malik's body with the bloody Sword, Reyuma made a natural but catastrophic assumption:

The Terrible Logic

Evidence: Her son held the murder weapon over his father's corpse
Emotional Trauma: Grief and rage overwhelmed rational thought
Spiritual Crisis: If her own child could commit such evil, what was the point of divine love?

The Corruption

In her devastation, Reyuma rejected everything the Tree represented:

Turned to Draco'Asmo: Sought comfort from dark dragons
Chose Corruption: Embraced bitterness over forgiveness
Became Mother of Draconians: Her corrupted bloodline produced the cursed race

The Twelve's Divergence

Faced with cosmic catastrophe, the twelve knights and maidens faced an impossible choice:

The Loyalist Response

Those who remained faithful to ElohYahRuosh:

Granted Immortality: Divine empowerment to continue the fight
Became Eternal Guardians: Protectors against the growing Draconian threat
Sacrificed Natural Death: Gave up peaceful endings until justice could be restored
Accepted Endless War: Committed to battle until divine order returned

The Defection

Others, convinced by Sero's arguments or overwhelmed by despair:

Joined the Rebellion: Served Sero as their new lord
Embraced "Liberation": Rejected divine authority as oppression
Gained Temporal Power: Received immediate but ultimately hollow rewards
Lost Eternal Purpose: Traded their divine calling for temporary advantage

The Ongoing Legacy of Destruction

Fate of the Divine Artifacts

The Sword of Arondor

Corrupted by Murder: Its use for killing transformed its nature
Lost to History: Hidden, destroyed, or transformed beyond recognition
Power Fragmentation: Its essence now flows through Torikah abilities
Prophetic Return: Will potentially reappear in the final age of restoration

The Tree of Zoi

Petrified Remains: Became Orificium, the magical metal that amplifies power
Essence Dispersion: Its life force permeated all creation, enhancing creatures and environments
Sacred Groves: Small fragments still grow in hidden, protected locations
Power Continuation: Its grace now flows through Rusikah abilities

Spiritual Ramifications

The Tor-Rus Division

The magic system's current form reflects this cosmic wound:

Forced Choice: Fourth Age practitioners can access only Tor or Rus, never both
Fragmented Power: What was once unified divine connection became specialized abilities
Dangerous Consequences: Using divine power without divine connection creates corruption
Longing for Wholeness: Deep spiritual hunger for the restoration of unity

Hope in the Darkness: The Promise of Restoration

Divine Foreknowledge

ElohYahRuosh's tear that grew the Tree of Zoi contained not just love, but love that fully understood the cost:

The Eternal Plan

Anticipated Betrayal: The Creator knew Sero would rebel
Accepted Suffering: Chose to create despite knowing the pain it would bring
Planned Redemption: The fall was allowed, but restoration was promised

The Prophetic Promise

"I will restore what was broken. I will replant what was cut down. Justice and Love will dance together once more."

The Restoration Prophecy

Royal Descendant: A rightful heir will emerge from the divine bloodline
Willing Sacrifice: This descendant will choose to give their life for restoration
Tree's Return: The Tree of Zoi will bloom again in its original glory
Sword's Reclamation: The Sword of Arondor will return to righteous hands
Unity Restored: The artificial division between Justice and Mercy will be healed

Current Significance

The Tor-Rus powers exist as they do because:

Fragments of Wholeness: They are pieces of a greater, unified divine connection
Temporary Separation: The current limitation is not permanent
Hopeful Preparation: Users develop skills that will be enhanced in the restoration
Divine Patience: ElohYahRuosh works through current limitations while preparing ultimate healing

Theological Implications

Nature of Divine Love

The creation myth reveals crucial truths about divine character:

Vulnerable Love: True love accepts the risk of rejection
Sacrificial Nature: Divine love gives at personal cost
Persistent Hope: Love continues despite betrayal and corruption
Redemptive Purpose: Even cosmic catastrophe serves ultimate restoration

Free Will and Responsibility

The story emphasizes:

Genuine Choice: Love must be freely given to be authentic
Consequence Reality: Choices have real, lasting effects
Individual Agency: Each person must choose their allegiance
Corporate Impact: Individual choices affect entire communities and generations

Justice and Mercy Integration

The narrative demonstrates:

Divine Balance: Justice and mercy are not opposing forces but complementary aspects
Unified Purpose: Both serve the goal of relationship restoration
Current Tension: The artificial separation causes ongoing conflict
Future Resolution: Ultimate harmony will surpass original unity

Literary and Cultural Impact

Foundational Mythology

This creation story serves as:

Series Foundation: The basis for all conflicts and resolutions in The Legacy Saga
Character Motivation: Explains why characters make their fundamental choices
Power System Logic: Provides coherent explanation for magical abilities and limitations
Moral Framework: Establishes the ethical foundation for evaluating actions

Cultural Variations

Different peoples of Arondor interpret this story through their own perspectives:

Yahra'Haba: Emphasize the promise of restoration and divine faithfulness
Noorai: Focus on the heroism of the loyal twelve and the importance of honor
Draconians: View Sero as a liberator and question the divine right to rule
Septuni Empire: Use the story to justify their control and suppression of dangerous powers

Character Development Implications

Archetypal Choices

Every character in Arondor ultimately faces the same fundamental choice presented in this myth:

Loyalty vs. Rebellion: Will they serve ElohYahRuosh or seek their own power?
Justice vs. Mercy: How will they balance structure with grace?
Individual vs. Community: Will personal desires override collective good?
Present vs. Future: Will they seek immediate gratification or eternal purpose?

Redemption Possibilities

The story offers hope even for those who choose wrongly:

Corruption is Not Final: Even Reyuma's fall was mourned, not celebrated
Restoration Remains Possible: The promise includes healing for all who turn back
Divine Patience: ElohYahRuosh continues to work through flawed people
Second Chances: Many characters echo the original choices and can choose differently

Discussion Questions for Readers

Personal Reflection

Loyalty Test: If you had been there at the beginning, would you have stayed loyal like the twelve knights, or might Sero's arguments about "liberation from divine tyranny" have tempted you?
Power and Responsibility: How would you handle the kind of power that Malik and Reyuma possessed?
Trust and Betrayal: How does family betrayal (Kal murdering Malik) affect your view of relationships and trust?

Moral Complexity

Divine Authority: Is it fair for a Creator to demand loyalty from free-willed beings?
Acceptable Sacrifice: Was ElohYahRuosh right to create mortals knowing they would suffer?
Justice vs. Mercy: When these two divine attributes conflict, which should take precedence?

This creation myth establishes that every story in Arondor is ultimately about the same thing: the choice between selfish rebellion and sacrificial love, between the illusion of independent power and the reality of divine relationship, between the temporary satisfaction of personal will and the eternal joy of unified purpose.

Sunday, July 13, 2025

Mount Bonds of Arondor: Panthers vs Wolves Complete Guide

Choose Your Bond, Choose Your Destiny

Overview

In Arondor, the relationship between rider and mount transcends simple companionship—it represents a spiritual contract that shapes the very soul of both participants. The choice between bonding with a panther or wolf determines not only how one travels, but influences spiritual path, cultural identity, power manifestation, and life philosophy.

"The bond between rider and mount isn't just companionship—it's a spiritual contract that shapes your very soul."

The Panther Bond: Spiritual Destiny

Cultural Groups Who Bond with Panthers

Primary Panther-Bonding Cultures

Yahra'Haba: The spiritual monotheists who see bonding as divine calling
Bet'Azaan: Matriarchal desert dwellers with ancient panther traditions
Shindanians: Forest harmony culture emphasizing natural balance
Arigag Nomads: The original panther riders and masters of the bond

Panther Bonding Mechanics

The Imprint Process

Critical Moment: Panthers bond with the first person they see when their eyes open as cubs
Exclusive Connection: One rider for the panther's entire lifetime
Irreversible: The bond cannot be transferred or broken without severe consequences

Spiritual Resonance

Shared Aura: Creates a spiritual connection between rider and mount
Power Inheritance: When the rider dies, their powers can transfer to the next person only if the panther still lives
Divine Selection: Yahra'Haba believe ElohYahRuosh personally chooses each pairing

Panther Bond Abilities

Emotional & Sensory Connection

Empathic Link: Rider and panther feel each other's emotions and physical state
Shared Senses: Ability to see through panther's eyes and hear through their ears
Spiritual Awareness: Enhanced perception of spiritual forces and corruption

Combat Capabilities

Combat Synchronization: Move as one unified unit in battle
Power Anticipation: Panther instinctively anticipates rider's Tor-Rus power usage
Danger Detection: Panthers can sense spiritual corruption and warn riders

Spiritual Enhancement

Prayer Amplification: Panther's presence strengthens spiritual practices
Divine Communication: Enhanced connection to ElohYahRuosh during meditation
Prophetic Sensitivity: Increased receptivity to visions and divine guidance

Cultural Significance of Panther Bonds

Yahra'Haba Perspective

Divine Calling: Panther bonding indicates ElohYahRuosh has chosen the rider for specific purpose
Spiritual Catastrophe: Breaking the bond through neglect or betrayal represents rejection of divine will
Community Responsibility: Entire community supports and protects panther bonds
Prophetic Interpretation: Bond circumstances often interpreted as spiritual messages

The Wolf Bond: Loyalty Forged

Cultural Groups Who Bond with Wolves

Primary Wolf-Bonding Cultures

Noorai: Celtic/Norse warriors emphasizing earned honor and loyalty
Septuni Empire: Imperial forces (though with less spiritual emphasis)
Descendants of the Ithori Kingdom: Ancient wolf-riding traditions

Wolf Bonding Mechanics

Earned Trust Process

Demonstrated Loyalty: Wolves choose companions through proven reliability and care
Shared Experiences: Bond develops through mutual survival and trust-building
Pack Integration: Rider becomes integral member of wolf's pack hierarchy

Adaptive Relationships

Multiple Bonds: Wolves can form bonds with different humans throughout their lifetime
Mutual Respect: Relationship based on earned trust rather than mystical connection
Practical Foundation: Bond strengthens through successful cooperation

Wolf Bond Abilities

Pack Coordination

Enhanced Teamwork: Superior group coordination abilities
Group Tor-Rus Casting: Perfect synchronization for combined magical efforts
Tactical Communication: Silent coordination through pack body language

Survival & Combat Skills

Enhanced Tracking: Combined human intelligence with wolf instincts
Battle Fury: Shared adrenaline that significantly boosts combat effectiveness
Survival Instincts: Navigation assistance through dangerous terrain and weather
Territory Awareness: Enhanced understanding of environmental threats and opportunities

Cultural Significance of Wolf Bonds

Noorai Perspective

Earned Honor: Wolf bond represents proven worthiness through actions
Merit-Based Relationship: Reflects cultural values of earning respect rather than inheriting it
Personal Achievement: Individual accomplishment rather than divine selection
Practical Wisdom: Focus on tangible benefits and tactical advantages

Comparative Analysis: Panthers vs Wolves

Philosophical Worldviews

Panther Riders Tend To:

Believe in divine destiny and prophetic purpose
Interpret events as part of larger spiritual plans
Value meditation, prayer, and ritual practices
Trust in faith over strategic planning
Seek spiritual guidance for major decisions

Wolf Riders Tend To:

Believe in earning position through demonstrable action
Focus on practical solutions and tactical approaches
Value loyalty, honor, and proven skill
Trust in preparation over prayer
Make decisions based on experience and logic

Combat Applications

Panthers in Battle

Stealth Tactics: Excel at striking from shadows with surgical precision
Hit-and-Run Warfare: Master of quick strikes and strategic withdrawal
Magical Amplification: Significantly enhance rider's Tor-Rus abilities
Solo Operations: Work best independently or in small spiritual groups
Precision Strikes: Focus on eliminating key targets efficiently

Wolves in Battle

Pack Coordination: Excel at coordinated group attacks
Sustained Combat: Maintain effectiveness through prolonged engagements
Physical Enhancement: Boost rider's physical capabilities and endurance
Military Integration: Optimal performance in organized military units
Overwhelming Force: Use numerical and coordination advantages

Historical Legendary Bonds

Famous Panther Partnerships

Abner + Valor

Historical Significance: First recorded panther rider in Arondor history
Cultural Impact: Founder of Yahra'Haba bonding traditions
Unique Background: Abner was raised by panthers from childhood
Legacy: Established the spiritual framework for all future panther bonds

Ari Griff + Aries

Current Relevance: Protagonist's bond in The Legacy Saga
Power Interaction: Panther bond specifically enhances Ari Griff's lightning abilities
Character Development: Bond influences Ari Griff's spiritual journey
Story Significance: Represents fusion of different cultural traditions

Famous Wolf Partnerships

Ithan + Fenris

Historical Achievement: First wolf rider in recorded history
Heroic Legacy: Instrumental in liberating humanity from dragon oppression
Cultural Foundation: Established wolf-bonding practices
Military Innovation: Pioneered cavalry tactics using wolf mounts

Agnes Ragnorson + Fenrir

Nickname Origin: Source of "The Lone Wolf" moniker
Combat Legend: Famous for independent operations and tactical brilliance
Cultural Symbol: Represents the ideal of earned respect and loyalty
Military Impact: Influenced Noorai warrior traditions

Mixed Heritage Challenges

The Bond Identity Crisis

Characters with mixed cultural heritage face complex decisions regarding their mount bond choice:

Cultural Conflict Scenarios

Yahra'Haba/Noorai Mixed Heritage: Must choose between spiritual calling (panther) or warrior tradition (wolf)
Identity Determination: Bond choice often determines which cultural heritage becomes dominant
Power Manifestation: Different bonds can influence which Tor-Rus abilities manifest more strongly

Dual Bond Attempts

Rare Occurrence: Some individuals attempt to bond with both panther and wolf
Typical Outcome: Usually results in spiritual or psychological damage
Cultural Taboos: Most cultures strongly discourage dual bonding attempts
Historical Examples: Few successful cases, often with tragic consequences

Bond Dissolution and Consequences

Panther Bond Breaking

Common Causes

Spiritual Corruption: Rider's moral or spiritual degradation
Faith Betrayal: Abandoning religious beliefs or divine calling
Death: Loss of either rider or panther
Neglect: Failure to maintain spiritual connection

Consequences

Psychological Impact: Deep depression affecting both rider and panther
Spiritual Catastrophe: Considered a community-wide spiritual crisis
Healing Requirements: Extensive community intervention and spiritual restoration
Long-term Effects: Permanent damage to spiritual sensitivity

Wolf Bond Breaking

Common Causes

Dishonor: Actions that violate pack loyalty or warrior codes
Abandonment: Physical or emotional neglect of the wolf
Betrayal: Breaking trust through deception or cowardice
Pack Conflicts: Inability to maintain position in pack hierarchy

Consequences

Social Marking: Rider marked as untrustworthy within their culture
Wolf Adaptation: Wolf may seek new pack or human companions
Personal Shame: Considered individual failure requiring redemption
Redemption Path: Must prove worthiness through significant deeds

Practical Considerations

Training Requirements

Panther Bond Training

Spiritual Preparation: Extensive meditation and prayer practices
Empathic Development: Learning to interpret and respond to emotional connections
Divine Communion: Training in recognizing and following spiritual guidance
Combat Coordination: Synchronized movement and magical timing

Wolf Bond Training

Pack Integration: Understanding hierarchy and pack dynamics
Loyalty Demonstration: Proving reliability through consistent actions
Tactical Coordination: Military-style formation and communication training
Survival Skills: Wilderness navigation and resource management

Maintenance and Care

Panther Care Requirements

Spiritual Nurturing: Regular prayer and meditation together
Emotional Attention: Constant awareness of panther's emotional state
Sacred Spaces: Providing appropriate environments for spiritual practices
Dietary Considerations: Special foods that enhance spiritual connection

Wolf Care Requirements

Pack Activities: Regular group exercises and social interaction
Physical Training: Combat drills and endurance building
Territory Patrol: Regular boundary marking and area familiarization
Honor Practices: Maintaining codes of loyalty and respect

Regional Variations

Geographic Influences

Desert Regions: Bet'Azaan panther bonds adapted for extreme heat survival
Forest Areas: Shindanian bonds emphasize harmony with natural ecosystems
Mountain Territories: Noorai wolf bonds specialized for alpine warfare
Imperial Lands: Septuni bonds focus on military efficiency over spiritual connection

Climate Adaptations

Seasonal Bonding: Some regions practice seasonal bond intensification
Weather Coordination: Bonds provide enhanced survival during extreme weather
Migration Patterns: Some bonds involve seasonal travel following game or spiritual sites

Future Implications

Evolution in Later Ages

The mount bond system continues to influence Arondor's development:

Technological Integration: How bonds adapt to changing warfare and transportation
Cultural Fusion: Increasing mixed-heritage populations creating new bond traditions
Spiritual Evolution: Development of new bond types as religious understanding deepens

Series Development

Mount bonds will continue to play crucial roles in character development and plot progression throughout The Legacy Saga, representing the ongoing choice between different approaches to power, relationship, and spiritual growth.

Character Development Questions

For Readers and Writers

Personal Choice: Would you choose the spiritual destiny of a panther bond or the earned loyalty of a wolf bond?
Personality Impact: How would your chosen bond affect your approach to challenges and relationships?
Cultural Values: What does your preference reveal about your personal values and worldview?
Character Creation: How can bond choice drive character development and conflict in storytelling?

In Arondor, the choice between panther and wolf represents more than transportation—it embodies the fundamental decision between accepting divine destiny and forging your own path through earned loyalty and demonstrated worth.

Saturday, July 12, 2025

The Tor-Rus Magic System: Complete Guide

Divine Tears and Sacred Blood: The Foundation of Arondor's Magic

Overview

The Tor-Rus Magic System represents the fundamental magical framework of Arondor, originating from two divine sources that embody the very essence of creation itself. Unlike traditional magic systems, Tor-Rus powers are not simply learned skills—they are manifestations of divine connection through either structured discipline or spiritual flow.

"When Divine Tears and Sacred Blood Create Power"

Key Limitation: In the Fourth Age, practitioners can only access abilities from one source—either Tor (Truth) or Rus (Spirit)—never both simultaneously.

The Fundamental Duality

TORIKAH: The Sword of Arondor Source

Core Essence: Truth/Structure

Origin & Symbolism

Divine Source: Created from ElohYahRuosh's divine blood
Represents: Justice, law, order, identity
Philosophy: "I know who I am, therefore I can reshape reality"

Manifestation Method

Approach: Structured thought and disciplined training
Requirements: Clarity of purpose and unwavering focus
Training Style: Systematic, methodical development

RUSIKAH: The Tree of Zoi Source

Core Essence: Spirit/Flow

Origin & Symbolism

Divine Source: Grown from ElohYahRuosh's divine tear
Represents: Growth, creativity, healing, emotional connection
Philosophy: "I feel the current of creation, therefore I can flow with it"

Manifestation Method

Approach: Emotional flow and spiritual surrender
Requirements: Divine grace and emotional openness
Training Style: Intuitive, adaptive development

The Color-Power Spectrum

Each color represents a paired set of abilities—one from Torikah (Sword) and one from Rusikah (Tree):

🔵 Blue Powers

Torikah Ability: Light Manipulation
Rusikah Ability: Lightning Generation

Signature Techniques

Light Blade: Condensing photons into cutting weapons (Torston's signature move)
Chain Lightning: Electrical discharges jumping between multiple targets (Ari Griff's signature move)
Invisibility Cloak: Bending light to become nearly invisible

🔴 Red Powers

Torikah Ability: Enhanced Strength
Rusikah Ability: Enhanced Speed

Signature Techniques

Mountain Stance: Immovable defensive position that can't be budged
Time Skip: Moving so fast it appears like teleportation (Grandfather Ragnar's signature move)
Shockwave Stomp: Channeling strength through the ground

🟢 Green Powers

Torikah Ability: Rock Manipulation
Rusikah Ability: Gravity Control

Signature Techniques

Earth Armor: Coating body in living stone for protection
Gravity Well: Creating localized high-gravity zones to trap enemies
Stone Sentinel: Animating earth constructs as guardians

🩵 Cyan Powers

Torikah Ability: Wind Control
Rusikah Ability: Enhanced Sight

Signature Techniques

Hurricane Force: Devastating windstorm creation
Eagle Vision: Telescopic sight over vast distances
Vacuum Shield: Creating airless zones for defense

🟠 Orange Powers

Torikah Ability: Fire Manipulation
Rusikah Ability: Ice Generation

Signature Techniques

Phoenix Cloak: Surrounding body in controlled flames
Flash Freeze: Instantly freezing moisture in the air
Dragon's Breath: Projecting focused flame streams

🟣 Purple Powers

Torikah Ability: Mind Control
Rusikah Ability: Mind Sight

Signature Techniques

Thought Implantation: Inserting ideas that feel like the target's own thoughts
Tracking: Using carefully placed Orificium objects to observe individuals, including hearing conversations
Mental Shield: Creating barriers in another's mind to block their powers

🩷 Pink Powers

Torikah Ability: Plant Control
Rusikah Ability: Foresight

Signature Techniques

Thorn Whip: Rapidly growing vine weapons
Future Glimpse: Brief visions of possible outcomes
Living Armor: Plants forming protective barriers

🟡 Yellow Powers

Torikah Ability: Water Manipulation
Rusikah Ability: Portal Creation

Signature Techniques

Tidal Wave: Massive water movements in combat
Mirror Gateway: Opening passages to distant locations
Blood Bending: Subtle manipulation of fluids in living beings

⚪ White Powers

Torikah Ability: Influence
Rusikah Ability: Sonic Generation

Signature Techniques

Command Voice: Nearly irresistible verbal directives
Sonic Boom: Destructive sound wave attacks
Harmony Weaving: Sound patterns affecting emotions

⚫ Black Powers

Torikah Ability: Shadow Manipulation
Rusikah Ability: Time Perception

Signature Techniques

Shadow Step: Traveling through connected darkness
Temporal Echo: Seeing past events in locations
Umbral Binding: Using shadows to restrain enemies

The Price of Power: Consequences and Limitations

Core Principle

"Everything Has a Price" - The Tor-Rus system enforces real consequences for magical use.

Mechanical Limitations

Physical Strain: Powers work like muscles—overuse leads to breakdown
Escalating Consequences: From minor changes to complete physical transformation
Recovery Time: Powers require rest periods between intensive use

Consequence Examples by Power Type

Lightning Users

Hair defies gravity permanently
Electronics malfunction in their presence
Random electrical discharge during emotional peaks

Fire Users

Body temperature permanently elevated
May unintentionally ignite objects when emotional
Requires constant hydration

Mind Readers

Begin hearing others' thoughts involuntarily
Difficulty distinguishing own thoughts from others'
Mental isolation as a protective mechanism

Plant Controllers

Skin develops bark-like textures
Experience seasonal mood changes
Attract insects and small animals

Speed Users

Normal time feels unbearably slow
Cellular aging accelerates
Difficulty with fine motor control at normal speeds

Gravity Users

Weight fluctuates with emotional state
Create unintentional gravitational anomalies
Affect nearby objects and people

Orificium: The Magical Metal

Origin

When Sero the Rus destroyed the Tree of Zoi, its petrified remains became Orificium—a revolutionary magical material.

Properties and Applications

Power Enhancement

Amplification: Dramatically increases power output
Focus: Enables precision control of abilities
Efficiency: Reduces physical strain of power use

Power Suppression

Complete Nullification: Can block all magical abilities
Selective Dampening: Reduces specific power types
Imperial Control: Used by oppressive regimes to control magical populations

Bloodline Bonding

Generational Attunement: Bonds with specific family lines over time
Inherited Enhancement: Power increases through bloodline connection
Legacy Weapons: Orificium items become more powerful through generations

Specialized Alloys

Color-Specific Enhancement: Different alloys boost different power types
Magical Metallurgy: Complex crafting techniques for specific applications
Rarity Factors: Some alloys require rare materials or specific forging conditions

Cultural Expressions of Power

The same Tor-Rus ability manifests differently based on cultural training and philosophical approach:

Yahra'Haba Tradition

Method: Ritual gestures and ceremonial preparation
Focus: Prayer and spiritual communion
Philosophy: Powers as divine gifts requiring reverence

Noorai Tradition

Method: Physical discipline and combat techniques
Focus: Clan traditions and warrior codes
Philosophy: Powers as tools for honor and protection

Septuni Empire Approach

Method: Systematic, scientific study
Focus: Standardized training and military application
Philosophy: Powers as resources to be controlled and regulated
Special Element: Development of power-suppression technology

Historical Evolution

Fourth Age: The Duality Period

Limitation: Users can access only Tor OR Rus abilities
Training: Specialized schools for each source
Conflict: Philosophical divisions between approaches

Eighth Age: The Anointing

Evolution: System transforms into "The Anointing"
Inheritance: Abilities become hereditary traits
Activation: Powers awaken through spiritual experiences
Modern Context: Forms the basis for superhero abilities in later series

Character Examples

Notable Practitioners

Torston

Power: Blue (Light Manipulation - Torikah)
Signature: Light Blade technique
Style: Disciplined, structured approach

Ari Griff

Power: Blue (Lightning Generation - Rusikah)
Signature: Chain Lightning technique
Style: Emotional, flowing approach

Grandfather Ragnar

Power: Red (Enhanced Speed - Rusikah)
Signature: Time Skip technique
Legacy: Family mastery of speed powers

Training and Development

Torikah Training Path

Self-Knowledge: Understanding personal identity and purpose
Discipline: Rigorous physical and mental conditioning
Structure: Learning systematic approaches to power use
Mastery: Achieving perfect control through clarity

Rusikah Training Path

Emotional Awareness: Understanding feelings and spiritual connection
Surrender: Learning to flow with divine will
Grace: Accepting power as gift rather than achievement
Harmony: Balancing personal desires with spiritual purpose

Tactical Applications

Combat Advantages

Versatility: Multiple approaches to similar problems
Specialization: Deep mastery of chosen power set
Synergy: Team combinations of different power types

Non-Combat Uses

Construction: Earth and plant powers for building
Communication: Mind powers for long-distance contact
Transportation: Portal and speed powers for travel
Healing: Various powers adapted for medical use

Theological Implications

Divine Connection

Source Worship: Powers reflect relationship with ElohYahRuosh
Moral Responsibility: Great power requires great wisdom
Spiritual Growth: Power development parallels spiritual maturity

Good vs. Evil Applications

Redemptive Use: Powers serving love and justice
Corrupted Use: Powers serving selfish or destructive ends
Neutral Applications: Powers used for survival or practical needs

Future Development

Series Evolution

The Tor-Rus system serves as the foundation for magical systems throughout The Legacy Saga, evolving and adapting while maintaining core principles of consequence, choice, and divine connection.

Expanded Applications

Future stories will explore deeper applications, new consequences, and the long-term effects of widespread Tor-Rus use on Arondor's society and spiritual landscape.

The Tor-Rus system represents more than magical abilities—it embodies the fundamental choice between structured discipline and flowing grace, between knowing oneself and surrendering to divine will. In Arondor, magic is never just power; it is always relationship, responsibility, and transformation.

Friday, July 11, 2025

Arondor Universe: Complete World Guid

A comprehensive introduction to the world of The Legacy Saga

Overview

Arondor is an epic fantasy universe shaped by divine purpose, ancient conflicts, and the enduring strength of its people. Created over seven years of development, this world serves as the setting for The Legacy Saga, a planned multi-series epic exploring themes of faith, honor, redemption, and the eternal struggle between light and darkness.

"In the beginning, ElohYahRuosh breathed life into Malik and Reyuma, setting in motion a series of events where light would have to overcome darkness."

The Avigdor System

Arondor exists within the Avigdor System, a complex cosmos containing multiple interconnected realms:

Mel'salem

Type: Heavenly Paradise
Inhabitants: Eloh and the Mel'akah (holy griffins)
Significance: Divine realm of perfect order and light

Battle World

Type: Spiritual Battlefield
Purpose: Where good and evil forces clash in cosmic warfare
Influence: Spiritual conflicts here affect all other realms

The Japer

Type: Gas Giant Planet
Nature: Realm of corruption and torment
Rulers: Sero the Rus and the Draco'Asmo
Relationship to Arondor: Arondor orbits within this trinary star system

Arondor

Type: Mortal World
Inhabitants: Humans and various peoples
Central Conflict: The ongoing struggle between light and darkness

The Great Catastrophe: Origin of Conflict

The First Guardian

Malik, the first man, was entrusted with the sacred Sword of Arondor and charged with protecting the Tree of Zoi, a source of divine life and order.

The Deception

The dragon Sero the Rus deceived Malik, leading to:

The destruction of the Tree of Zoi
Malik's death
Arondor's fall into chaos and corruption

The Corruption of Reyuma

Reyuma, the first woman, became corrupted following these events and became the mother of the Draconians, a cursed lineage that would plague Arondor for generations.

Major Forces Shaping Arondor

The Twelve Immortal Knights

Role: Protectors of Arondor
Mission: Fight to restore balance to the world
Status: Still active, continuing their ancient duty

Imperial Powers

Various empires have risen to seek control over Arondor's nations, bringing oppression and conflict.

The Revolutionary Movement

Led by warriors like Ari Griff Yahra'Aslan Cameron, these forces fight to reclaim the land from imperial control and restore righteousness.

Peoples and Cultures of Arondor

The Yahra'Haba

Core Values: Wisdom, balance, and prophecy
Nature: Deeply spiritual people
Role: Keepers of ancient knowledge and divine insight

The Noorai

Core Values: Knowledge, strategy, and honor
Nature: Warrior society
Strengths: Military excellence combined with scholarly pursuit

The Septuni Empire

Nature: Imperial force
Methods: Conquest and control
Goal: Domination over all nations of Arondor

The Draconians

Origin: Descended from Reyuma's rebellion
Nature: Cursed lineage
Relationship: Antagonistic force representing corruption

Note: Many other peoples and cultures exist throughout Arondor, each with their own unique traditions and roles in the greater narrative.

Central Characters

Ari Griff Yahra'Aslan Cameron

Role: Protagonist of The Legacy Saga
Background: Warrior and heir to a powerful legacy
Internal Conflict: Torn between duty and faith
Mission: Fighting against the empire while searching for redemption
Family: Has a lost twin brother named Azriel

Azriel

Relationship: Ari Griff's lost twin brother
Status: Separated from his brother, fate unknown
Significance: Key to Ari Griff's personal journey

Jeshua (The Messiah)

Role: Divine figure providing wisdom and guidance
Influence: His teachings and presence will be crucial in determining Arondor's fate

Themes and Spiritual Elements

Core Themes

Faith vs. Doubt: Characters struggle with belief in divine purpose
Honor vs. Pragmatism: The cost of doing what's right
Redemption: The possibility of transformation despite past failures
Light vs. Darkness: The eternal cosmic conflict playing out in human hearts

Spiritual Warfare

The conflict in Arondor operates on multiple levels:

Physical: Military battles and political struggles
Spiritual: The influence of divine and demonic forces
Personal: Individual characters' moral and spiritual choices

The Legacy Saga: Planned Series

The Legacy Saga encompasses multiple planned book series set in Arondor, each exploring different aspects of this rich world:

Primary Focus: Character-driven storytelling within epic fantasy framework
Scope: Multi-generational conflicts and resolutions
Style: Deep worldbuilding combined with spiritual themes

Reading Arondor Stories

Current Available Content

Blog Series: Various short stories and character explorations
Worldbuilding Posts: Deep dives into cultures, history, and lore
Character Studies: Detailed explorations of major figures

Planned Releases

The Legacy Saga: Multi-book epic fantasy series
Companion Stories: Shorter tales exploring different corners of Arondor
Historical Chronicles: Stories from Arondor's ancient past

Explore Further

Want to Learn More?

History & Lore: Discover the detailed timeline of Arondor's past
Magic Systems: Understand the spiritual and mystical forces at work
Cultural Deep Dives: Explore the traditions and beliefs of Arondor's peoples
Character Backgrounds: Learn the full stories of heroes and villains
Maps & Geography: Navigate the lands and kingdoms of Arondor

Join the Community

Follow the Blog: Stay updated on new stories and worldbuilding content
Engage with Content: Comment, share, and discuss your favorite aspects
Ask Questions: What part of Arondor interests you most?

About the Creator

This world has been in development for over seven years, serving not just as a creative outlet but as a source of healing and purpose during difficult times. Arondor represents a deeply personal exploration of faith, redemption, and the power of storytelling to transform both creator and audience.

Welcome to Arondor. The journey of light overcoming darkness begins here.

Thursday, July 10, 2025

The Rebellion Still Stands

This short story I wrote as a writing exercise and I wrote with minimal historical research outside of the movie Braveheart and Outlaw King, I wrote it to build some skills for thematic writing.

My life is a wash. My lands lost , my ancestors ashamed. My wife, my children…

God has abandoned us, the Scots a people with no king to lead them.

“Oi!” a soldier shouted at the beggar, “get off the road you damned leach!”

“Y-yes sir,” the beggar said humble, with his back crouched in shame as he backed away from the soldier who sold his people for a fortune in gold for the foreign crown, he bowed low as he backed away hiding the family sword of his shame which hung on his belt, the hilt was barely visible.

“Halt!” another voice shouted this one was proper English, the other man approached from the side examining the broken destiny attached to the worn belt of a man who believed in the revolution so much that it cost him everything. “this is a… A Broken sword!” the soldier howled in laughter, as the traitor joined him. Off in the distance was a figure in the shadows, watching the exchange he looked at the beggar with an eerie familiarity.

“You must have one of Wallace’s boys then?”

The Beggar did not answer he just shifted away from the soldiers, but the figure perked up when he heard the name, his body moving slowly.

The traitor persisted, “Oi, he asked you a question.”

The man gripped his eyes shut as shame polluted his fury, “N- sigh -Yes, I was one of Wallace’s men, once a Scottish laird but now I am just an old fool with a bum hand who believed too much in a free Scotland in a united people against English tyranny. This broken man you see before you now was once a great warrior who would’ve fought both of you boys with one hand tied behind his back, but now I am just an old broken washed up beggar with no king who will fight for him, who will believe in him!” he paused as tears flooded his eyes, “I am nothing.”

The English soldier chuckled to himself, “Old man, I believe that you still got some spirit in ya,” he pulled his sword out with the scabbard sill attached, it was a two handed long sword, “Lets see if I can beat it out of you.”

The old man pulled his broken sword from its scabbard, in its heyday the weapon was a magnificent claymore one that his grandfather had forged himself when he took control of their first lands, but now the weapon was as shattered as he was, as broken as forgotten, as useless as he was standing not quite able to lift his sword to height, with his bum shoulder shooting with pain and his right hand mangled from the British soldiers who found him attempting to flee the battle, shame reared its ugly head as he fought off the memories to just focus on the man infront, 20 years younger, spry, blonde haired, tall strong and English most of all. The Englishman charged forward his sword wacking against the old mans head as he fell, he stood attempting to grip the sword with his left hand his grip full, but as he charged forward the English man used the extensive reach of his in tact sword to block his attack, reaching for the man’s collar pulling him into his knee causing the man to fall down his hand still gripping his honor. The English soldier kicked the old man in the gut while he was still on the ground, with a laugh the soldier kicked him again. “I think that we have squashed the last of the rebellion, what do you think lad?” The soldier looked over at the traitor who seemed now uncomfortable. This time the figure marched forward drawing his sword in hand as he exited the shadows.

The old man gripped his sword, his nations rebellious spirit and with one fluid motion he sliced off the English soldier’s foot on his support leg, causing him to fall as he cried out in pain. The old man stood his sword in hand, wiping blood from his mouth from his free hand, “The rebellion still stands, because I do.”

Then the figure came from the shadows, it was the true king of Scotland, his claymore ready for the fight, “You English boys seem to take an interest in beating up an old man, how about you fight someone your own size.”

The Scottish traitor stood, “R-Robert, I-I’m not with him, I’m Scottish like you.”

Robert shook his head, “You stood by and watched as your fellow country men are being beaten down and sisters raped by the english monarchy, you seem pretty damn English in my book.”

Robert charged forward attacking the traitor and cut him down with a single strike, he turned to the English soldier who’s foot had been cut off and said, “As you and your people have crippled my people and left them to live in suffering so I shall leave you in yours.”

He shook the blood off his sword so that it hit the mans face and helped the old man walk away. As they approached the King’s party, the old man asked, “Sir why do you want me in your army? I have nothing to offer, I have no Lairdom, no men, no sons, not even a whole sword, not even a whole man myself…”

King Robert the Bruce shook his head, “The Sword can be mended, men can be redefined, how will you define yourself?”

“Not much of a man, I-I…” the old man teared up, “I’m a coward, I ran when I saw them take Wallace, I feared for my life.”

“It is not the faults of the past that define a man but the dictates of his destiny.” Robert put his hand on the old man’s shoulder, “Take a reminder of who God created you to be my friend and we will get you back into fighting shape soon, and we’ll take a thousand English men to hell together.”

In my life I was broken and forgotten, betrayed and alone.

But today I have chosen hope, and Hope chose me too.

Thursday, April 17, 2025

Confessions of a Time Traveling Serial Killer

This image was created by D'Andre Clarke: artbydre@gmail.com

Greetings, mortals, and welcome to my humble abode. In this labyrinth of stories, I have found the perfect narrative to suit your darkest desires, The Confessions of a Time Traveling Serial Killer, written by... an unknown individual, my examinatory eyes of defiance have discovered this treasure among the wreckage of a lost age of legends. Please come and hear the tale of... Dave, as he faces his greatest foe, his dream.

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I woke up to a knock at the door. Groggy and irritated from late night writing, I sat up, glancing over at my phone, the bright light of the screen blinding to my eyes. After blinking for a moment, I could see an email from the publishing company:

From: Inksblot Publishing

Subject: Update on submission request

Status: Rejected

Sighing, I tossed the phone aside, another rejection, another failure.

The knocking returned, assaulting my ears. Gritting my teeth, I threw the sheets off, hobbling to the door to see a box on the ground. It was covered in industrial tape and on the address, I glanced at my name, David... Picking it up I thought, Why would the Fed Ex guy knock on the door if he is just going to leave the package on the ground?

Throwing the box on the couch, I returned to bed to finish my sleep.

After lying down for another hour, I finally got up of my volition.

After getting dressed, I walked to the box to see the full name, David Samuel Robertson? The writer?

I opened the box, my curiosity getting the better of me. It was a book manuscript, not very long from the looks of it. I also found a watch, the clock and calendar glowed. The book was only about seven chapters, and the title was interesting, Confessions of a Time Traveling Serial Killer. And because of that title, I read the book. The author David S. Robertson had been my favorite writer since I was a kid and I would read his novels over the summer to win the summer reading program, I even got into writing myself because I wanted to be just like him. So, I began to write stories that...never...worked out...wait a minute.

Holding the manuscript close, I saw...my name, Dave John Keller! Reading further, I saw the prologue which detailed my day up to this point, from the email rejection to opening the manuscript to the shadowy figure standing behind me, Behind me!?

Spinning around, I saw... him. “This must be some joke!?”

“This is no joke, Dave, you are the champion... of my murder story...”

Eyes wide, I stood from my chair, “Who are you!?”

The man chuckled, “You might know me as the Author of this book, the man, the writer you’ve always wanted to emulate...”

“David... Samuel... Robertson...” My eyes scanned the man before me, he was much younger than the Author I had idolized, in fact, he slightly resembled me... No, that’s impossible. Chuckling to myself, “What’s this supposed to be?”

The writer beamed, “You’ve read my works, you know my...mystery style is a little unorthodox.”

“You tell your murder mysteries, from the perspective of the killers who commit the crimes, and is this how you do it, send the manuscript before killing your victims?”

“Oh...no... Dave, I’m allowing the champion to have the script to his first bestseller. Once you and I have our... little adventure, you will publish the novel under your own name, of course.”

Gritting my teeth, I punched the table beside him, “I’m not playing your sick game!”

“You will...because it is my game to play, the players choose their pieces, as writers choose their characters. You cannot resist David, the dice have been rolled, and the bell cannot be unrung. The path is mine to walk, so take it and RUN!” The writer leaped on me out of nowhere clasping his hands around my throat, locking his hands as David laughed maniacally.

Fighting back, I punched the man’s face, as I struggled to breathe, everything was blurry, and my vision went dark.

Then there was light and a not-so-light slap on my cheek. Reluctantly I opened my eyes to see a beautiful blonde woman, Samantha. She was crouched over me cradling my head, “Davey, are you okay...”

Sitting up my head pounded, like it was stomped on by and elephant, “I-Grunt-I’ll be okay...”

Rubbing my temples, I remembered the manuscript. Looking up I saw two police officers going through my stuff, and Robert was with them. What’s Robert doing here? I stood to my feet as Samantha cradled my arm helping me up. Robert rushed over, “You good bro?”

The police think it’s a break-in.

Eyes widening, “The manuscript!” Frantically I rushed to the table and began looking through papers an old manuscripts.

“What is it,” Samantha asked.

“The Manuscript...is...missing...” I said, looking through papers, before switching to the counter and being stopped by one of the cops.

“Son, are you looking for this?” The officer said in a heavy southern accent held up a stack of papers.

Grabbing the manuscript, I yanked the paper out of the cop’s hand, “Thank you, sir!” Sounding a little too sharp there.

Robert put his hand on my shoulder, “Sam found you on the ground and she called the cops, I came over when I heard the sirens next door, are you doing okay.”

I need to get through this. “Uhhhh... I fell, nobody broke in officer....” I grit my teeth, crap.

“Son, nobody mentioned a break-in.” The officer said bluntly

“Right! well, I’m fine.” My voice cracked momentarily.

The officer grunted and left my home. After Robert let the officers out, thanking them for their time, he turned, “Alright, what the heck is going on, Dave?”

I shrugged my shoulders, “Nothing is going on!”

Robert persisted, “Nuh uh, you’re gonna do something stupid, now tell me what’s going on.”

With a heavy sigh, I told them the truth, “This morning, I got this manuscript in the mail, and I saw my...well... our names in this book as if we were characters in the story, and you’ll never guess who wrote it...”

Samantha stepped forward, “Who?”

“David Sam Robertson.” I said bluntly.

Robert blinked, and ran to his apartment next door, running back with a newspaper, “Look!”

The front page of the newspaper said that David S Robertson had just committed suicide this morning. This is getting spooky.

Beep.

Samantha took the manuscript from me, “Confessions of a Time Traveling Serial Killer, What kind of a title is that?”

Beep.

“He...kind of...said...he’s...a time traveling...serial killer.” Biting my tongue as I realize how that sounds.”

Beep.

Robert smacked Samantha’s arm in excitement, “I freaking knew it!”

BEEP!

Then the watch started blinking and then beeping. Samantha looked back at the beeping watch, “Is that supposed to be doing that?”

Before anyone could answer, a massive white hole tore open in the air, its unnatural force yanking all three of us in. The manuscript slipped from my grip as we spiraled into the void. A tunnel of swirling space engulfed us, the pages of the manuscript floating just beyond my reach. I stretched for it, fingers grasping at nothing. As we floated through this tunnel, visions flashed before my eyes, I saw the face, his face, David Samuel Robertson, but he had a top hat on, and a monocle over his eye besides the outdated clothing he looked younger and almost like me, then a voice said, You cannot escape your destiny, David... The voice echoed all around me, “WHO ARE YOU!!”

Robert put his hand on my shoulder, pulling himself over to me, “Dave, who are you talking to?”

Samantha reached for my hand trying to comfort me, she knows how I get sometimes, but I pushed off her and Robert’s shoulders, launching myself toward the manuscript. My fingers closed around it just as we were spit out of the tunnel.

...And crashed on a wooden crate with a painful thud!

Samantha landed on the cobblestone next to me with a groan. Robert landed on something softer... A DEAD PROSTITUTE!

Robert scrambled off of her gagging. I peeled a broken eggshell off the manuscript’s cover, smearing yolk as I tried to wipe it clean. The woman’s dress was disheveled, as if she’d been dragged from a window and stabbed repeatedly in the chest. Robert frantically wiped at the blood on his shirt, looking like he might be sick.

Samantha slow turned as she looked up, taking in the cobblestone streets, the gas lamps, and the carved stone adorning the buildings, “Guys... this is the Victorian era.”

Robert blinked at her, “How do you know?”

She shot him with an exasperated look, gesturing at the world around us. “Because I studied history in college instead of goofing off like you two.”

I ignored the jab and flipped through the egg stained pages of the manuscript. My stomach caved. “Guys... this is Chapter One.”

I gulped, “A Framed Ripper...”

There was a shadow down the way, that’s got to be him, “David Robertson.” I yelled as I ran after him, “Get back here!”

David turned a corner into the shadows as I ran in, facing the darkness. Sneaking through the dark, I could see nothing. Spinning I saw David, a bit younger, with the same top hat and monocle over his right eye, he wore a trench coat and walked with a cane, Just like my vision... “Dave Keller, I see you accepted my invitation.”

“I’m not accepting crap, your stupid watch glitched, and now I’m stuck here, you’re gonna tell me how I’m getting home.” I said yelling at the man, who I once idolized and now is my demise.

David chuckled, “You thought that you could run from the plot?” He chuckled, “Instead you shall be the Champion of this novel, I shall write.”

“You already wrote the thing, I have it right here,” I said, holding up the manuscript.

“Don’t spoil the ending, I haven’t written it yet.” The Writer said.

If I beat him at his game now, I can stop all this from happening.

“You can’t stop the events from transpiring, David, and do you know why?” He said response to my thoughts.

“And why is that?” I asked, humoring the psycho.

The cloaked man raised his eyebrow, “You never wondered why I sent the manuscript to you?”

Scoffing, I replied, “I just figured you’re a psychopath, and you picked out a victim at random, maybe you wanted to torment one of your fans for some sick reason.”

The writer leaned forward as if sharing an amazing secret, “David, I picked you for a purpose, for a reason, because the champion must become the challenger.”

I stepped back, now uncomfortable, “What are you saying?” You cannot escape your destiny, David…

“I, young David, am you in the future, and you are me in my past.” His grin was now full, ear to ear, as the truth set in.

“No, No, No, there’s no way, I would never...” I stepped back, unable to accept what he said.

“The potter does his best to shape the clay...” He said, or... I guess the other me said, “But the devil... Oh, he knows how to whisper...”

Leaning forward, I grabbed him, or myself, by his collar, “I won’t become you, I believe that I will change my destiny, even if you are right, I will not become you.”

David shook his head, “Oh my boy, I said the same thing when I was you, but then... David...Samantha...Robert... I became me...” he said as he looked up with a knowing smirk.

“Are you threatening my friends?” I ball my fists ready to throw the first punch.

“No...but there is one more clue you are missing for your destiny.” David said as the gaslight flickered and his grin now full, a gust of wind tore through the alley way his trench coat flowed in the wind, paper flew across my face and as I brushed it away... He was gone.

There is no way that this killer is me…
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And so dear readers if you ever receive a manuscript in the mail think twice before reading... or writing...

Saturday, March 1, 2025

Reflective Post: The Wounds We Carry

What Happened?

Recently, I've been reflecting on the personal baggage and losses that we all carry. For me, this includes the sudden passing of my birth father last year, which left me with unresolved emotions and anger. I hadn't seen him in eight years, and the lack of closure was overwhelming. I also struggled with feelings of betrayal and hurt from past experiences at my former job, which even led to a year of suicidal ideation. These experiences have been a heavy burden, affecting my ability to grow and heal.

So What?

As I reflect on these experiences, I realize that holding onto anger and resentment can be a form of "dead weight" that prevents personal growth. I've found that my instinct is often to cling to these feelings because I feel justified in my anger. However, I've come to understand that this doesn't lead to healing. Instead, I've learned to rely on my faith as a way to release this burden. It's not just about letting go; it's about actively choosing to forgive and trust that God can heal these wounds.

Now What?

Today, during morning prayer, I felt a strong urge to forgive those who wronged me at my former job. This was a challenging process, especially with one person whose name I couldn't recall, which I believe was my subconscious resisting forgiveness. However, as I declared my identity in Christ and sought guidance from the Holy Spirit, I was able to forgive and begin the healing process. It won't be immediate, but I've taken the first step by choosing to let go of that anger and see the situation with grace rather than resentment. For now, I'm focusing on not revisiting those painful memories until I can view them without anger or betrayal.